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Me All Over

Lonely and alone,
Lively and happy,
Emotional and sad,
It’s me all over.

Getting by every day,
Just keep on foot in font of the other,
Gravity pulls my head to the ground,
Take little notice of the comments.

Friendly and friendless,
Talented and unknown,
Bright and unseen,
It’s me all over.

Eyes on the floor,
Always trying to do my best,
With stupid quotes and broken hearts,
Not what the label says.

Loving and broken hearted,
Fragile and strong,
Imperfect and mucked up,
It’s me all over…
©2008-2009 ~Lady-Of-Sorrows654
:iconlady-of-sorrows654:

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:icononosokie:
I love you're style. You have amazing flow and there's the deep intense feel to this poem. It's simply wonderful.

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Fate doesn't make mistakes. Sometimes those insignificant people or the people we hate so much are there because of Fate. Because Fate knows that those people can push us when those who care about us never would.
:iconlady-of-sorrows654:
Thank Youu :) I Read Some Of Your Poems And Some Others And Sorta Used That As Like Insperation.

Thankooooo™©

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And we once more fall to our knees,
Screaming someone help us please!
:icononosokie:
You're welcome. ^^

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Fate doesn't make mistakes. Sometimes those insignificant people or the people we hate so much are there because of Fate. Because Fate knows that those people can push us when those who care about us never would.

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